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A remake of a previous deviation: [link]
I am really happy I re-did this, especially since I know how to use the pen tool now.

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:iconblackharpygoddess:
That's one heck of an improvement
the only thing that bothers me is that his right thumb disappears into his arm. Might give that an outline or something

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Snouts and snails-
and little piggy tails-
that's what little boys are made of

Lies and Stories-
and all Hells glories
that's what little girls are made of


~Gr@c3
:rose::blackrose:
:iconrec-roomninja:
Unfortunately, the AI file has been lost to the ether.
I'd have to go in with Photoshop and change it, and I really don't have the time to deal with it now (it took me weeks just to upload this thing)
:iconneogs99:
Just a suggestion, perhaps it could have more effect if liquids or crumbs were being squeezed out of the soda and burger. Other than that, it looks good!

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~Love is something you feel when you're sick of having the guards stare at you.
~OK, I know what a Kite is, and I know what an Orca is, but...what's a Balmung?
~Pooh Bear, I think you think too much.
~Sugar is the equivalent of alcohol for children.
:iconxxpeyotedragon:
I agree with this. I had to kinda look at it a bit to understand what was going on with the drink, my first impression was somehow he was holding it with the back of his hand. Then I understood he was twacking it quite proper, but then I thought "there needs to be speed lines indicating it is being hit" but then I realized it wouldn't work with that style... so yes, that woman who is probably a female is correct in her feminine opinion of the girly matter.

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